tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3834915461310051803.post2259625148785281243..comments2024-02-07T03:49:03.440+01:00Comments on Jonas - The Receiver of the Memories: Chapter 17 – Jonas’ DiarySophie Kodathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13372836607886146085noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3834915461310051803.post-90424969012509407192020-12-16T17:52:20.339+01:002020-12-16T17:52:20.339+01:00Describe Rosemary’s conflict in Chapter 18 Describe Rosemary’s conflict in Chapter 18 Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12958585325762338051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3834915461310051803.post-72338531512675201292020-12-16T17:48:28.642+01:002020-12-16T17:48:28.642+01:00What does he “remember” that the others don’t? What does he “remember” that the others don’t? Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12958585325762338051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3834915461310051803.post-66065607634148780532011-04-03T23:18:53.470+02:002011-04-03T23:18:53.470+02:00Sophie,
lovely diary entry with lots of niec idea...Sophie,<br /><br />lovely diary entry with lots of niec ideas. I especially like the description of the ic´ncident when playing "good guys - bad guys" as this marks the difference between Jonas, who knows about war, and the other children. Well done!<br /><br />Something on language:<br />- commas: In case of doubt, leave them out!<br />- to handle sth / to deal with sth.<br />- you don't "remember" a memory. you just "have" it<br />- except FOR<br />- after refusing to ride<br /><br />PS: Sarah, you are such a teaser ;)Englisch EF (Bru)https://www.blogger.com/profile/08524287681208619424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3834915461310051803.post-35114141636424050252011-04-01T13:14:25.819+02:002011-04-01T13:14:25.819+02:00This post is shit. I don't like it! No, only a...This post is shit. I don't like it! No, only a joke ;)April, april!<br />The diary entry is good to sum up the chapter and you include the feelings and thoughts of Jonas. I think it's really good and the "Phew!" is the coolest word in this post xD<br />xoxo <3Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04050421889832858064noreply@blogger.com